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Abhay Singh Card Concept 1 by AbhaySingh1 Abhay Singh Card Concept 1 by AbhaySingh1
This is a business card design that I'm working on for myself. :) I really need some constructive criticism and feedback on this, as these cards have to last me quite some time once they're printed. :P I'll be sending these off to my printer in a few days, so am trying to finalize the design asap.

The top part is the back of the card and the bottom is the front.

So... please critique!!

Other than that, all comments and faves appreciated! :)

EDIT: Increased the space around my name/website on the black side, please comment.


Credit for the background texture goes to [link] by ~ftIsis-Stock :)
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:iconfreshbusinesscards:
Freshbusinesscards Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2010
Hello !!

I added your business card for inspiration at www.freshbusinesscards.com

Enjoy :D:D
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swollenskull Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2010
Cool, its original it would be awesome if the icons were more random.

But i like how you highlighted the main part with a yellow marker
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thathafofaa Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2009
what´s the name of the font? could u upload the font? :)
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BioSss Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2009
I dont like the small icons you have putted there. :( Sorry man...
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:iconabhaysingh1:
AbhaySingh1 Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2009  Professional Interface Designer
Ah that's OK, a matter of personal preference I guess :)
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BioSss Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2009
But the idea is pretty good.
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AbhaySingh1 Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2009  Professional Interface Designer
Thanks!
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darkee999 Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2009
Original idea. I like it. Although there was a suggestion about that yellow highlights I think they go perfectly with the hand made theme.

I would use a business card like this
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AbhaySingh1 Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2009  Professional Interface Designer
Thanks a lot :) These look even better in print hehe
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darkee999 Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2009
Don't tempt me, cause I feel the need to (not speed) have them! >:)
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AbhaySingh1 Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2009  Professional Interface Designer
Haha :)
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scoobynko Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2009  Professional Interface Designer
color concept isn't good but desing and kompo concept is really nice ;)
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:iconabhaysingh1:
AbhaySingh1 Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2009  Professional Interface Designer
Ok... any suggestions?
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scoobynko Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2009  Professional Interface Designer
maybe pastel colours...it accentuate cartoons images...
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:iconabhaysingh1:
AbhaySingh1 Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2009  Professional Interface Designer
Hmmm... thanks for the suggestion, I'll try it out and see how it turns out :)
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scoobynko Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2009  Professional Interface Designer
nop ;) try it :)
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medisgreen Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2009
About the Black side:

I like your little sketchy icons, it's pretty graphic to say what you're made of. But the repetition doesn't seem to work while you want 5 of them to stand out. So you seem to be increasing the work for the viewer's eye. What if you tried to just keep the emphasised ones and got rid of the rest, would that make it a little peaceful?

I see a repetition of your brand name on both sides, probably for recall value. I guess can't stand against that but, what i could put forward is that it is your card from both sides and the time it takes to flip it is about 1-1.5 secs, which will keep the viewer recalling your name when he remembers the images immediately. So do you really need it on both sides?

On the white side:
I like the icons now in subtle grey. They surely work here (instead of in the black). Once again, you mention your website becomes too redundant.

I like the color combination. It seems pretty funky for the Abhay stuff i know :) and I liek the change. You should do more funky stuff for yourself, suits you :)
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AbhaySingh1 Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2009  Professional Interface Designer
Thanks for the feedback :D

And I've replied to this already, so I won't say much here. ;)
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freakyframes Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2009
Visuals looks Good.
But IMO, the yellow, black and white contrast is so strong that its dominating the orange of your logotype. Specially in the black bg one.
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AbhaySingh1 Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2009  Professional Interface Designer
Ah, thanks for the feedback :)
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